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Drain The Swamp

Submitted by chevyvent on Sat, 2017-02-18 20:16

Corruption
Hearts plunged in mass hysteria
Donald Trump
We must rid ourselves from such corruption
Rage against the machine
Evil schemes
They hide behind the false hidden garb of compromise
Can't we see through these lies
The parade of political upheaval
Eyes with tombstone in their heads
Evil minds that plug destruction
There brain washed minds
Viscous fangs that bite
Bribes
Some one has to do it
Hillary Clinton
Drain the swamp
It's my right as a card carrying citizen of the human race
The unusual tone with blood soaked heavy in our Peyton Place
Blackened hearts with greed soaked in there internal membrane

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Please use care (this is a sensitive subject for me, do not critique harshly)
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Sparrow

Sun, 2017-02-19 03:53

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Try not to be drawn into the swamp before it is drained.
A good write but feel that as a passenger in a boat no matter what the captain does you are being carried along.
Escape into your beliefs, but if they are not strong enough to hold you above all this, then search for ones that hold you up as a person.
A horse, and taking it to water springs to mind, if you are the horse then you will know when to drink.
Take care out there it is a test and we will learn of many things as we wander on,
Yours Ian..

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