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DON'T EVER RUN

Submitted by lovedly on Wed, 2022-01-05 17:14

DON'T RUN
to no where
but in circles

nothing beyond beyond
best is you know it
but won't ever accept it

you leave your heart and eyes
all to fire or dust consigned
where
behind
for Earths consumption
newer evolution
continuation
can't you understand
if not hold my hand

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Geezer

Thu, 2022-01-06 08:53

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seem to have a way to circumvent the situational conditions. I wish that you could put as much effort into writing something light hearted and less somber. Nevertheless, a nice effort! ~ Geez.
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lovedly

Thu, 2022-01-06 11:03

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this one was on someones poem here

keep running
searching angels and dead ones
near about eternity
lol

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