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DONATE YOUR EYES

Do please give away those lovely eyes
which are a beauty so lovely
the gift I want from you only.
as you look into my eyes,
a wave of emotion does within me arise.

how I become so very eager to have your full view
wow wow can you ever even dream how much I'd love to see you.

your eyes give me a worldly mine,
in this world I’d also like to shine.
hope to someone you will someday
your eyes donate before you pass away.

but ere I go the world ought to know
those were my eyes they belonged to me

donate your eyes ere its too late
many aspirants are waiting at your gate.
someone will love to see through
they will forever bless you

some later day, do remember the blind
our lovely eyes someone will also find.
when of them we'll have no need,
six feet below we will be buried indeed.

but a lucky one will see and learn to fly
imagine his happiness, simply just try
your eyes are for me and mine are yours
as long as we live but hopefully

later someone else for these will long,
as our eyes no more to us will belong
her lovely eyes were mine

how I become so very eager to have your full view
wow wow can you ever even dream
how much I'd love to see you smile your whisky smile

your eyes give me a worldly mine
in this world I’d like to shine.
hope to someone you will someday
your eyes donate, ere you go away.
gift it lover boy your eyes

but ere I go the world shall know,
those were my eyes
they belonged to me.
donate your eyes ere its too late
many aspirants are waiting at your gate.
someone will love to see through these
they will forever bless you as you please
many blind ones must have done so

some later day do remember the blind
our lovely eyes someone will also find
when of them we have no need,
below the earth we will lay indeed.

but a lucky one will see and learn to fly
imagine his happiness and just try
your eyes are for me mine are yours
as long as we live but hopefully
then someone else for these will long
as our eyes no more to us will then belong

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you have some specific eyes in mind? I would donate my eyes, but they are too old and have looked upon the world for too long. They have seen many marvelous things, but they are [one blind] not much use to anyone but me now. For fifty-seven years, the one has served me well. I know how precious sight can be and I too, urge those with good eyes, to make sure they will donate them in the event that something untoward happens and they are taken from life while their eyes are still of use to someone else. A little repetitious but, a well thought out message. ~ Geez.
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much of your ego in this one lovedly. I feel this is one, that is straight from your heart! ~ Geez.
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Love starts from the heart ~~~blood flows u know ~~~~emotions spread all over// then when u become someone ///EGO!!!!~~~~ bursts/// your brain A Narcissist you become and ///drown in the drain
you read my poem for May competition .Read it again
you may

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to focus on you much like when Anthony asked the Roman mob to give him their ears.....................or I could be totally wrong lol

niceeeeee stan
lend me your ears
I'll donate my half blind eyes

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