Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.

Dolphins Galumph By.

Dolphins galumph by
that strange yearning joy they bring
a good day to be

Video at-
https://youtu.be/YaBjJ1eZShk

Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 

Comments

Ha! Are you happy today?
Great poem!!!!
Love it.

IRiz

just thinking of dolphins.
Ta.

cheers,
Jess
Neopoet is a workshop. Poets take the time to read and think about your work and offer suggestions.
There is no obligation to make any changes however please acknowledge critique and comments.

author comment
(c) Neopoet.com. No copyright is claimed by Neopoet to original member content.