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Behind Veiled Curtains

A very simple thought
travelled at lightning speed
what will happen if I meet you
face to face
behind automated veiled curtains
you do me trace
yes!
you stand owing to limitations....

But
what would happen if on a stage
I smiled at you
as your consort eyed your gaze
I know my heart would seize
if I were you

So take no chance
life is one,
enjoy the present romance

But let me know what would happen
if I’d come across the globe perchance
and
you in imagination to disrobe
the idea will be your make
take it or perish 'tis your life at stake

But tell me what will happen
even if ‘tis a mistake
Ha, ha you are sweating
come cut a Happy Birthday cake....

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good imagery.

Alid

alidz for such a flavour

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Since you have come out
in the open jungle
of autumn leaves
where none can us retrieve

the silence carries
far more silence
into the far
and lonelier distance
peacefully

and so

now make love with me
as we two are in a carpet palm
of autumn leaves

silence is golden all around
you can see
now love me dearly
till beckons the whistling breeze
come darling be one
with me forever please.

roving poet

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