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DIVINITY--updated

DIVINITY

I catch glimpses of shadows
from the corner of my eye,
unexpected intrusions, like ghosts,
fleeting quickly by.
I feel chills from deep inside,
a feverish anticipation
that steals my mind,
and a sickening intuition
of some future time...
a frightful presence divine

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Can I suggest a small change in preseentation
Imo it just might read more smoothly as

a feverish anticipation
that steals my mind,
and a sickening intuition
of some future time...

Love judy
xxx

'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)

done. thanks.

joe

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