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Diva's flick on a February moon

DIVA:
a flower
with tentacles
tingling my heart.
A finger
painting the calendar
on our walls
every 14th February. Speaks words
of geography:
world wide web of love.

SHE
dances in the air, right
beyond it to Galaxy's plains -
far above the rainbow.
I see you
clearly decked in red roses
all over the moon.

SPARKS
of a million kisses
you give;
bubbles of a zillion hugs
let loose,
like flying cannons
in rhythm & bliss; that

BUTTERFLIES
light up my belly,
from your tickles and chuckles. That
you've become
a dream etched in my heart;
a forever, in my arms.

Last few words: 
February 14th is a day dedicated to love. Love is universal. Love is here depicted as a feminine, DIVA, in recognition of the wonderful roles women play in our lives. Love is a beautiful thing.
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Comments

Really excellent and unique format. The poetry is good as well and I love the theme and execution here.

Tim

Thanks Tim for your appreciation of the poem. It's an attempt on new style and format. Glad it turned out well.

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Did you notice that the first words of the 4 stanzas make meaning when put together?

DIVA: SHE SPARKS BUTTERFLIES

This fits into the Valentine theme.

Interesting indeed!

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you should re-post this lovely poem again on February 14th. excellent job.

*hugs, Cat

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