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dittos

dittos
I’m going to
ditto you,
why you know,
as your critiques do glow
upon warm hearths of hearts
some brightness does blow
into kaleidoscopic rainbows

Oh! what the hell does Loved spell,
a link between those who know
with those who don't
well who are those?
a few Neo's think alike
they strike
as all are poetic legends
may be of tomorrows

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Look at you
Overly introspective again
Venturing into fresh fields
Ever vigilant about critique
Ditto ditto Ditto.

Ok your piece was fine I was just being a bad fellow again lol.
This is just a bit of fun, lol, I have locked Yenti, and Ian.T, in a dark room so I can play,
Yours Sparrow

There in the shadows grew a monster
It ate at my own shadow piece by piece
I heard myself scream leave me alone
There was no one to hear my lonely cry

What could I do?, as I blended with the dark
Nothing cried the shadows there is nothing
I am of the nothing you believe in hear me.
You believe in nothing, there you shall remain

Is there but a creature that can help my plight?
Too late the darkness laughed, you belong to me
Did you think that your reason could let you go?
Now dwell in this darkened place till rebirth

Ian.T He He He

.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

simple talk
ditto

loved

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I shall write a proper Acrostic on loved when time permits.
Yesterdays it was Sparrow that locked us in,
Yours Ian.T and the other two

.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

now at least u read me
and i read u
then there will be in Neopoets
left only we two..LOLOLOLOLOL

loved

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Indispensable, the one and only one

Automated poet of Neo

Nuances of all kinds of poetry he alone knows

acrostic I composed for decades....
till some one told me
what I had accomplished
I did not then know it

see ignorance is
BLISS

loved

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