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Dip Dip Treat
dip dip dip
then have a small sip
till you feel
the brew is just right
then dip dip dip
this time with a biscuit
it tastes pretty good
soaked in tea
if you dip it too long
making it strong
have tiny little sips
for a longer lasting treat
dip dip dip
with a little flip
to let the spices
stream out
dip dip dip
till the bag goes to sleep
put it in the bin
with a squeeze
dip dip dip
not with finger tips
else you'll go
lick lick lick
Style / type:
Free verse
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Comments
Rula
Wed, 2018-07-18 08:36
A tea addict
aren't you?
A lovely read with all those dips
The last stanza put a smile on this face as I could only picture someone with a melting bar of chocolate
Delicious indeed.
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raj
Wed, 2018-07-18 13:40
Rula I'm what is called a tea
Rula I'm what is called a tea totaller not sure if it means addict...if it does you have to blame the tea not me lol..few more have been put in the Blog of IRiz and one more shall find its way there may be tonight... a bit funny
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raj (sublime_ocean)