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DIGITAL KIDS

My brain is made of golden chips
that's why that alone works mostly
hold one
will you
and
then someone will say
golden threads one is now on
whose
will be news

the chip will ask a question
is it now on
or
say diamond slow down
better on than off

so digital God gave a hint
one for that
and
zero we can't say
we all know not

hence one and a dot
keep fixing a lot
genetic progeny
in each slot
a vertical dash
and
then shall come a dot

bang on the given slot
a one and a zero
in turn off and on
one at a time
else both shall be gone

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DIGITAL KIDS perhaps you know not still ‘tis digital kids This is just sheer imagination how future kids will be born scientifically
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get it. Maybe you should, try to clear up the matter of the diamond? ~ Gee.
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golden threads one is now on

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