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digest human reality

Submitted by lovedly on Sat, 2016-02-06 18:02

digest human reality
but you must know
there is nothing afterwards to know ...we all just go ...have you ever observed a dead rat... if not then do so.... you will see what will also become of thee.... and you, notwithstanding human or animal... we all are just like one... someone.. unknown one ...wanting the world to know ...we were someone.... but the fact remains ...we are now no one.... the one time superior body becomes.. just a body ...wheres' s the body... bury it ...cremate it ...then from somebody, within no span of time.... we become forgotten ...as no body....for this fact alone we all should remain ..for ever ready ..... no one who came and is no more... can ever explain... ..so do not disdain ..... be happy on Earth ..as far as you do remain... Period.

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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Esker

Sat, 2016-09-24 14:45

Esker's picture

life is the breakfest..the lunch...the dinner..
and then death
after the aperifs
the cigar
the pleasure of someone
at your side
Then ride into the night
or morn to the great
unknown....or as my culture
says..The Great Mystery!

I am not afraid of it..
to be giving the gift to draw life
is a gift from God whom breathed
life into our lungs
and gave us the choice of either
Evil or Good
because doing good is so hard
Most lazy just chose Evil
and as most dont want too work
hard...we can see the world
full of No Gooders..

If there is a heaven I shall
enjoy my gold cadillac and home
and meet my old friends and
beauties whom have gone on
paid the price
I know when I die
I will not be lonely

Thank U Lovedly!

lovedly

Sat, 2016-09-24 21:02

lovedly's picture

no you will not be lonely
you will not know anything also

but in the hearts of poets
still living on mother earth
you will LIVE
through your enlightening works

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Esker

Sat, 2016-09-24 21:22

Esker's picture

there will be fertile hunting grounds
and multiple virgins
the Valkries will carry me..
my own mother might be there
both of them.birth and adopted
Imagine!

hope they have good coffee there..
Spanish coffee the best
and Good Cuban cigars!

thank U!

and if its just sleep
then it will be a much needed
one for putting up with the old
world...Truely earth is hell
Beautiful old failed Satan!

lovedly

Sun, 2016-09-25 13:05

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then there it is on Earth only
heaven is a long airy ocean
of ether only
hence everything is eternally free
for you and me
enjoy as many
and
all your virgins here only

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