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The Diffrence Between Something, Everything And Anything

blankets . something you can
lean on that's always there.
something that is portable,
something that you can hide under,
something you can cry into. but
it's also something that covers,
and holds all your problems. your
blanket knows why your crying and
it holds on to that. and in the process
it is hiding and taking away the problem
from you. it's coverage from anything,
everything, and something.

you may think that anything, everything
and something are the same thing but
they're not. everything is all things: all
thing of a group or class. Ex: earth.
anything is an unspecified thing. Ex: park.
something mean one singular thing, but not
to me. something is a thing that protects me
and loves me and doesn't judge me. Ex: my
blanket, my friends. that is something to me.

when I call you something it's my way of
saying that I love you. or you are extremely
important to me. that is MY definition of
something. anything could be anything.
everything is everything, but something
is one unique thing that could never be
replaced. something means everything
to me. something is I'd give anything for.
something's aren't worth losing.

my something is spoken word. making
these speeches is my something. it
brings me joy and comfort. in 8 years,
if I'm lucky, my name will show up on google
and you would see me speaking spoken
word there. but I'm not quite there yet,
I'm not quite something yet.

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hearing someone else's voice can give a different perspective. If you have a problem I will delete it.
What is your Facebook name? I can post it there too, you might not have to wait 8 years for Google.

Some small typos to fix- There should always be a cap after a full-stop however I will regard that as your choice.
Diffrence Difference
line 1: Superfluous space between blankets and period
line 8: your [you're]
lines 16,17,20. I really would say example, not ex. Would you read ex?
18 mean [means]
24 MY [the caps are not necessary, my by itself carries the meaning strongly]

37. You are, you are really something.

I hope this helps.

cheers,
Jess
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of explaining what your perspective is on everything, anything and something. Other than the changes that Jesse has suggested, I don't see anything that needs to be re-worked. ~ Geezer.
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