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DID YOU BLOW

Submitted by lovedly on Fri, 2020-12-04 16:43

BLOW HOT BLOW COLD BUT SLOW
Here it's biting cold
the beginning of frost
take care all
lest it bites your feet

slowly winter is setting
life is becoming dull
and boring

no work old age is a curse
but not yet not as worse

life is like Christmas Bells
at times only
you feel like asking
for whom the bell tolls

read my tribute to
FLASHY

You will see me
ma'am
Gracy

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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scribbler

Mon, 2020-12-14 10:12

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They seem to go hand in hand. Yet winter is still my second favorite season. Like your poem.

lovedly

Mon, 2020-12-14 11:55

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if winter comes
can spring be far away
so spring up stan

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