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The Devils Pearls

A mournful cry
pierces the night
a lesser man would take flight
yet there beseeching the broken night
he splays bespoken dreams

Oh to what gods do I pray
that of Isis and Osiris
to end this longing and dismay
remove the darkness and dispair
or be you on thy way

And who will speak a eulogy
for the death of a sustainable
part of me
remote and distant this day
no more, no more will this go on
passions fire has departed and gone
only in memory does it live on

On this dark and dreary night
when angles have forsaken his plight
a horned figure is in his sight
he'll give his soul away
and find the howling is his own

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Love this poem, great language and word choice. I like the inconsistency in your rhyme 'pattern', it adds a unique character to the piece and makes it more intriguing. Great work!

looking forward to working with you

Chrys

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