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Destination

A heart empty of dreams

Is just a

Bird without wings.

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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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I'm just trying to create the smallest poem. LoL
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Not Explicit Content

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A very short piece that simply tells the truth. Dreams take us places far beyond the steps our feet can ever take. Thanks Teddy.

Bathe yourself with poetry and let the world go to pieces.

Thank you so much, if we don't have great dreams within us we may as well be parked in the same place always, this was a dedication to my younger brother who is going to buy his first home soon. I'm honoured you have enjoyed, maybe it's a quote or maybe a tiny poem I don't know. Thanks for your encouragement.

Thank you...Teddy

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