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DEPARTURE

Friendship is a sound
of music
it has lovely
harmony
you know it

friends are hard to come by
you only know it

I miss all my friends
parting daily
How I wish
you knew it

Lovely sentiments
are conveyed
by poets
now you also
know it

lovedly

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

the outpouring of the heart, part of who a person is, unafraid of revealing who they are, because of the impersonal use of ink on the page and not the upfront, face-to-face interaction, and sometimes, people just want to connect with someone, anyone! I like this: "Lovely sentiments are conveyed by poets, now you also know it." ~ Geez.
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It seems that the days and hours that people
are available for chatroom are staggered and
not a good match for most everyone. How about
if everyone just shows up at the door, whenever
they have a few free minutes?

I like your comments
please continue
and
you also know it
a real poet art thee
now all know it

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