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Deleted Attitude

Ball breaker , heart taker
Urban slut, fuck that

Man eater, Micky taker,
Should know her place.
Hell no.

Foul mouth, hardened
Bitch, slag , bites back
Revenge, on the attack.

To all those who 
Attempt to label
Her fuck that

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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Lou,

well you just rant away!

Great aggression!

HS

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With all that I am and all that I could be, I walk this earth, yet nobody sees me.

I was going for the minimal approach.. lol

I had a poem posted on here earlier , and when I came back to update it, there was only half the poem on the page, so I deleted it.
I've added the poem again.

Lou

Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!

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In the distant future when you cease to worry so about others' opinions, you might consider saying what you really mean...............lmao........scribbler

I always say what I mean lol

This poem is not auto biographical, it is just a means to convey an attitude, that of the subject and the people who judge her. A work of fiction , created purely from the imagination.

Lou x

Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!

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thanks

lou

Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!

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