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Definitely Always Something

Submitted by BettyBuff on Sun, 2014-11-30 15:09

Never quite hip
never quite timeless
but
definitely always fearless

In rainbow ships
your chakras less
so
probably never tireless

Vibrations flip
in streams of stringless
chords
perhaps always hapless

Creation is definitely always something...

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judyanne

Mon, 2014-12-01 22:37

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your chakras less ... wondering re the text ... do you mean to use an apostrophe?

love - perhaps always hapless lol
and great alliteration especially with the esses

an intruguing and fun read - i enjoyed this
nothing to really suggest

love judy
xxx

'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)

judyanne

Mon, 2014-12-01 22:39

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your chakras less ... wondering re the text ... do you mean to use an apostrophe?

love - perhaps always hapless lol
and great alliteration especially with the esses

an intruguing and fun read - i enjoyed this
nothing to really suggest

love judy
xxx

so sorry - i don't understand why i'm doubling up - it has happened a few times - lol - my latest post even went on twice!!!

'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)

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