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December’s Haiku

Sun rays freeze as snow,
lights on trees and hanging balls;
December has come.

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Structured: Eastern
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is more a Western type of Haiku, it isn't a subtle turn of events, reached by almost connected thoughts; but rather a strong line of progression? However, it does the trick and is a full story. BTW. there is no punctuation in Haiku. ~ Geezer.

This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place

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