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December’s Haiku
Sun rays freeze as snow,
lights on trees and hanging balls;
December has come.
Style / type:
Structured: Eastern
Review Request (Intensity):
I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
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Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Geezer
Thu, 2021-12-02 23:35
This, to me...
is more a Western type of Haiku, it isn't a subtle turn of events, reached by almost connected thoughts; but rather a strong line of progression? However, it does the trick and is a full story. BTW. there is no punctuation in Haiku. ~ Geezer.
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This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place