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A DAY IN FLORIDA

Nothing new
what do you do
Florida
is now fresh ado
lovely city
NOTHING MUCH
to woo

I missed you
some day
maybe due
not today
another day
in May I'd say
coming to Florida
for a breezy
lengthy/OK long beech day
what do you say.

Wow
where have my bikinis gone
the sea was wild
currents strong
what and when went wrong

I've had no bikinis on
since morn
I was wondering why
everyone was staring
and
smiling

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
A fun piece for FEMME'S --- LIKE it ask for more bikinis not more be quite sure
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Hi, Lovedly,
I'm thinking the beach isn't the only thing bare, here! Clever poem, humorous ending! Since we now have about a foot of snow, Florida sounds wonderful!
Thank you!
L

here we have 2 feet
FLORIDA is far away
sunny days
older poems r not read
when will those be fed
when I'm dead
lol
incidentally only u do the favour
and bring out my poetic flavour
while the rest waver
lol
ma'am

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What a fun peice of naked poetry. lol Florida is calling, I like your last lines they did make me smile as you always do

have a great day dear Lovedly

Thank you...Teddy

piece of naked poetry
TNX

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imagine you in a bikini, and I'm quite sure that I don't want to! LoL
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YOU MUST BY NOW KNOW
SO MANY poems you miss on purpose

But when I compose a poem I
DON'T KNOW
WHETHER I AM A MAN OR WOMAN

I cover all human
all like vision
like desire
all need warmth and fire
I can't fulfill everyone's desire
so poetry salvos
I freely fire
some see me nude
some imagine
am I crude
not rude or too prude

still I love you
the bikini was borrowed
you know
inner wears
I don't wear also
BEING RETIRED AND AGED
I STAY ALL DAY AT HOME
NOW SHIFTING TO ROME
VENICE THEY SAY IS A LOVELY HOME
DID YOU NOT KNOW...

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