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Dark Ere Dawn.

They say
there's a lull before the storm

I overheard some one say
it's darkest before dawn
I retaliated man
Are you talking of my
Loveliest Dawn
he blurted
the one ere the sunrise

I smiled I'd never seen one
as I sleep till
SUN'S NOON
So what will I know of nature's dawn
why mourn before the morn
light will come be sure then you may search
what
your gone
dawn .

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
TWO DAWNS MORN AND MINE BOTH GONE SINCE LONG
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

this is both charming and thoughtful. I admire it much!

*hugs, Cat

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ma'am Cats

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