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Dark days

Seconds turn into minutes,
hours turn into days. 
My hurt is forever present,
why should I remain? 
They ask me to carry on fighting,
but what am I fighting for?
Im a lonely soldier in an army of one,
battling an endless war.

Review Request (Intensity): 
I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Last few words: 
Not at my best atm and these words came into my head.
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content


Will look forward to see what you do after editing....obviously written in a dark mood...most have them at some point in their lives...i wish you battle it out and come up trumps.....

be well...

raj (sublime_ocean)

many thanks xx

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