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damning sorrow for love
when I heard
Miss Piggy laugh,
on those days ?
I would be OK
between the oceans
of pain, we had paddled
to meet
plastic bags of magic
hang from fishing poles
wheeled in, by flying nuns
with blessings
of water and love,
we divined ways to forget,
the moments in minutes
when agony pushes through
to shave another piece off
our shared sheer will,
and eating the pieces
were the demons
we all harbor,
unwilling jailers
of repeat offenders
spot our roll-call
barf jokes became
our Da Vinci Code,
and when one of us
started losing ground
it was you who brought
us back around,
the eternal clown
no frowns allowed
rest in Elysian fields
my darling,
in the wee hours
eternity crept from eyes
and misted with disbelief,
from the oceans we traveled
we drink a drop
to you
our funny love,
damning all sorrow
to another day
Comments
Bonitaj
Mon, 2013-01-21 09:42
Seren!
"damning all sorrow to another day!". What a powerful concept to round off this interesting write!
Can relate and moreover Enjoy!
Thanks
Bonitaj
Bonitaj
Mon, 2013-01-21 09:42
Apologies
Repeat posting
Bonitaj
Seren
Tue, 2013-01-22 03:06
ello Boni
I am very glad you liked those last lines they are some of my favourites in this one
thanks for the read and the comment
love Jayne-Chloe xxx
“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats
Frenchf
Mon, 2013-01-21 13:54
Though the images were fantastic
All I could think of was bullaemia!
Seren
Tue, 2013-01-22 03:07
Dear French
I have had leukemia for a couple of years now and this ones about a friend who lost the battle against cancer, she was a joy nothing more can be said
Jayne-Chloe xxx
“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats
Frenchf
Tue, 2013-01-22 12:54
Hope your type is chronic!
Actually fits bullaemia and anorexia quite well as well so it is interesting but I definitely caught the nuance of drip feeding I thought for anorexia and death from anorexia but in this case chemo induced
Hope you are ok xxxx
Geezer
Mon, 2013-01-21 23:04
Related by sorrow...
sisters in memory. I wouldn't change a thing. I could hear the laughter of the clan and see the flying-nuns!
Awesome! Love ya, higgest bugs, ~ Gee
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place
Seren
Tue, 2013-01-22 03:08
Smiles
Sisters in memory I like that, very glad you like this one I still have to fix the tense's up they are still a little muddled
love and higgliest bugs Jayne-Chloe xxx
“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats