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Cunt Spill

a future promise
a hard on like bundled gym socks
in stuffed blue jeans

a future threat
a shriveled phallus wrinkled obsolete

she remembered fondly
being beaten drum chatter
and seized like slow roasted
fall off the bone pulled pork
fucked raggedy Ann
catapulted beyond Euboean heavens
ravaging scrotums Gordian gonads
with her wild fiendish mouth
drinking a river of
haloed golden showers
spit and scum
in a runaway hot house of glistening pink buttery spires
engorging her macerated orifices

half eaten radish
chocking on hordes
of big do do dicks
a Lolita face; cross eyed
Babylon abalone
bashed Ashly mashed
begging for
a face full of swinging balls
like caped chandeliers
trotting faint giggles
in a constellation
of ruptured arteries
and thick sparked ovum

on her knees
milk glitter faced
scared with happiness
she counted one smiling bruise at a time

her badge of calamities
black and blue silhouettes
grinning invitations like party favors
without a crease of shame

her skin rapturous
spackled patchworks
bled like torrential fountains summer tide
while every body had fizzy red ice phlebotomies
and steamed through her drooling tumble pie

lust whore totem
house of winding labyrinths
honey pumped transfusion
flush on blush
opera of tangled limbs
red pulse wedding flowers
slick vulva palace
blood tongued orchard
caressing knotted mooned
cunt spill

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Every time I think I've seen the [best] of you, you fly into sight with another spill of cum soaked, freshly roasted nuts to feed us! Your cheerleading, rah-rah, celebrating sex shows are a matter of course. ~ Geezer.
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Read it to all your girl friends; that and little tickle and you can spread them like budda ;)

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Ive been censored and attacked by the goodie two shoes young Apparently the slippery slide of life gives a sense of humor Thank you !!!!!

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I write what I want thanks. If you have something intelligent to say about craft say it.
If you don't like that aspect of my contribution than please feel free NOT to read it
Ill write what I damn well please!!!

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