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a cross stick

Glad you told us twas an acrostic
I was about to my a neck stick
but beauty lies in poetry
emotion ...

who says it must always rhyme
while composing an acrostic
you commit no crime
rhyme or no rhyme
it was acrostic
I wrote for quite some time
till someone told me
you are...
that is..
I was
an expert of the kind
now you all follow
the free verse
of Loved's mind...

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Free verse
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Alarmingly secretive these are
Carrying codes from afar
Relaying information to use
Offering a safe haven for news
Secretly evasive in their form
Telling too few the message born
Incantations are often found
Catching the reader when read aloud
So to the dictionary you must go

Acrostics are more than just a first letter, sometimes carried in a forked stick or pinned to a cross stick, I shall stick with my stick as it is stuck to me with sticky stick..La La Sparrow

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

poets struggler's
rosy blower
a cross stick
seed of life TIME Still unseeded

did I compose
seed ??
can't locate it please
consider it as read
if you consider ...
I'm alive not dead

loved

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seed of life TIME Still unseeded
Submitted by loved on Tue, 2012-06-19 12:45
seed of life TIME

You do see through
metaphorically the seed of life
from within human
and
then take on another sojourn
towards a newer generation,
as the only constancy in life
is change
and
that the new seed provides
as an admixture,

West and East.

after another hundred years
there will be no
West or East

all humans will inherit the earth as meek,
poverty stricken,
nude
stark raving mad ,
raven hungry

upon the souls of politicians
will be swords
and
there will be no leader
except a universal God
and that is
TIME..

Any others you need me to find just ask LOL, Yours Ian

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

but I couldn't locate it
owing to paucity of time .
Hope you are happy now

loved

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Sorry I thought you would have liked a copy, of the one you couldn't find, Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

I got and i get what your saying, only crit i would give is, i would put ( i was about to my a neck stick ). Regards Roscoe...

Roscoe Llane,

Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.

i was about to my a neck stick
endorsed....

loved

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