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Crayon Lines

Where is my line?

What is you?
What is me?

Where is the threat?
Where do I step?

My lines get drawn in crayon.

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content


So many questions, have you the answers. This can be taken anywhere as far as the imagination could go. I would like to see you expand on this.


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Okay... I think I needed the push to return and expand the poem. As is, I think it is provocative, but with not much meat on the bones. I will explore answering some of those questions... Thank you

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