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Crap poet says he ...for me

My master after reading this said
I was a CRAP poet .

You bless my confidence
I admire positive folks like you
have read some of your works too
Beautiful

Hardly a poet.
hoping to be one
some day
one day
if not today

Let my Master say
what he may
by now all know
he condemns more
than one count
on ones fingers

Still we pray for his
invaluable criticism

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Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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I love your lowly demeanor! The only thing you are a slave to is your 'chutzpa' [arrogant exuberance]. Don't ever change! ~ Gee

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Narcissism is my axe
it keeps me axed

I am a born poet
never schooled
so I compose poetry
as seeds from my tool
brains seeds only
how it happens
no one knows
but it ensues
and
me pursues

thanks to your chutzpah elixir

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its so wonderful reading you all
I could compose one page poetry
ere I stall
some one will call me
CRAP
someone may come to slap

but I am so happy
still thousands daily fall at my lap
no they don't slip
that's what is off my map

But when one seeks perfection only
he needs a big wrap
and
bury his muse along with him
six feet below

or

hang him on the roof top
so that the world would know.
Poet what!

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