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Crack An Egg On My Head

Is it possible to have the perfect day?
No doors flying open
and none slamming shut
No windows closing
not one nasty surprise
I don’t know if I will get through without a hitch?
I do hope so
I think everyone deserves that?

At least on their birthday.

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My friend was tested positive for Covid yesterday and it just happened to be my Birthday, talk about a come down from the happy cloud! what did Frank Sinatra sing, THATS LIFE! he wasn't wrong.
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I'm truly sorry about your friend; I hope your friend pulls through without difficulties.
Get yourself tested as well, even if you had only casual contact. Nice write, btw.
Jerry

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Yes, I haven't seen her for a long while, but in my local town there are many cases. Thank you Sir. It's becoming pretty damn hard.

Thank you...Teddy

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Dear Teddy, so very sorry to hear about your friend. I've read that most European countries are having enormous surges in Covid. Do take care of yourself.
Your poem is questionning, well written, good spacing and the title is fine. Yes, Frank Sinatra was right. I hope you managed to have a good Birthday despite the sad news about your friend. My birthday is on the 27th.
Take lots of care, a special hug, Gracy

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"My soul is painted like the wings of butterflies; fairy tales of yesterday will grow but never die, I can fly, my friends.” – Freddie Mercury

Thank you. It wasn't the best but I don't mind, I am more sorry for all these people who are suffering the virus. Glad to know you are well and a very happy belated birthday to you.

Birthdays or wedding days, i don't think anyone could enjoy them at this moment. Love to you dear gracy

Thank you...Teddy

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dear Lady. Hope that your friend gets well without any lingering after affects. As for you... You can't be sick, Halloween is coming soon! ~ Geez.
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Yes, what a come down from a happy day, hey Halloween, indeed if I had one wish, it would be to trick or treat at your house! Big hugs.

Ps it's also our local football team in quarentine now. Oh so damn close

Thank you...Teddy

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to have you Trick or Treat at my house! I love to scare people! ~ Geez.

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