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Covid Karma...

It isn't something to worry about
Says the President
We're coming around the corner
He says with a little pout

Look at Joey Biden
A great big mask, you see?
I think that bastard's hiding
He's so scared of me

Look at me, I'm so brave
I go all bare-faced [lies]
So many lives I could have saved
Don't look me in the eyes

Holding a great big rally tonight
Dems, you stay away
The Proud Boys have come to fight
They heard what I had to say

Ooops, I came on way too strong
Ruined our debate
Shouldn't have talked so loud and long
I guess it is too late

I'm feeling kind of woozy now
Feeling a little sick
My breath is coming harder, Wow
Get to the hospital quick

So, I guess that Karma comes around
As many people say
I hope that there's some sympathy found
Come election-day

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Structured: Western
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I really hope that he doesn't die, but I wouldn't mind if he was good and sick. A full recovery to you, Mr. President!
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Oh My goodness, i tried to find an error in this to help you get it to its best, but i couldn't it slides like butter off the tongue, Karmer be a very very strange thing right now, the whole world is fixed on this. I wouldnt wish bad on anyone, but Trump, must play his own trumpet now, take the medicine like us poor ones, and know that calling it the chinese virus doesnt keep it at bay, I have fights every day when i have to sit on a bus or tram-via with people not wearing masks, here in Florence its a serious law and people don't take notice. I could kiss you this evening Sir. If anyone could pull this off it's you and you have not dissapointed at all. KUDOS!

Thank you...Teddy

your most generous comments. I could probably find something to tighten it up in a place or two, but I'm too tired right now. Maybe I'll come back later to look at it. I just had to get this down before I forgot what I wanted to say. I had a couple of the first lines already written in my head and wanted to make sure I didn't lose them. ~ Geez.
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In my humble opinion nothing needed. but of course wait for the others!!!!! GOOD LUCK BUDDY! lol

Thank you...Teddy

I reckon you are already aware that I disagree with the premise of this one but I'm gonna help a bit anyway. Stanzas 1 through 7, just delete (just kidding lol). Now to serious stuff .First stanza last line try he says instead of says he.Stanza 4 line 3. try the proud boys have come here to fight. Well that's enough for now you can go back to being misguided politically lol

helping me out with that line. I got the line 3/ stanza 4 too. Yes, I know where you stand on the premise, but...He does make such a good subject to write about. ~ Gee.
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I guess we'll see if the mood strikes me

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