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Could've been a Doctor (no poet )

Hahahaha
I could have been a doctor
but for the poverty
from a millionaire
pop became
a pauper

life's governed by three factors

Heredity

Environment

and

Circumstance
only

I am just a victim
@15
actually
thus became a poet now known
Internationally
lol
15
This they all call is
Destiny
Fate
of an insignificant
human being

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

of tthe cosmos, we are all insignificant; be it a doctor, lawyer, Indian chief, whatever. What matters is what you do with the life you are given. As you say, you are an internationally known poet. What could be better than that? ~ Geez.
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and
it nails my head
lol
NICE analysis GEE
Thanks
HAPPY I BE

author comment

thank ye
yes
certainly definitely

author comment
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