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Confusion

The troubled mind
seeking solitude
amidst a vast multitude,
an array of thoughts
culminate into a juxtaposition
where to emerge
remains a vision
nay confusion,
ere the sun drowns beneath the ocean
time envelopes insanity
man remains silent
in remorseful vanity
Alas!

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Yes, alas!

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
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If only we could look inside and see just that perfection that we all want to achieve,
Without the influence of the day to day things that pass by, and attach to our thoughts.
This is where the ability to be able to think in an emergency comes in, the ability to block out all surrounding sounds and thoughts and react in a positive way.
Quite rare this ability and takes a lot of practice, like not hearing someone when they are shouting at you.
Take care have a quiet day, Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

wisdom
you are a King
of your own kingdom
well done

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I am a little wowed by this one its not a comment is it, this is a poem my friend

nice work

love JC xxx

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

this is a poem
first time
not such a comment

loved

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love this helluva piece. learn some new words.;)

Alid

for ur kind reading

loved

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