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come kiss me... don't take it seriously read by 120 already elsewhere

I need to be kissed no,
none does me give this bliss….
I yearn more for a kiss
than some joker commenting on this
my missing of a kiss …
I hope soon someone will send a pack too…
no, not of cigarettes
but of kisses
as I open the envelope, all kisses will fly
to catch all like a butterfly
I shall try

hope I can savour some and share
the runaway ones
come sweethearts across the Internet,
I'm here lonely,
in the darkness, what I miss is
nothing more than blooming kisses,
maybe some rose may kiss!

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Day poem, Loved. I hope that you recieved as many kisses as you could take without being suffocated!
~ Geezer

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for this one...
wasn't choked
but all over soaked

loved

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out of the envelope

could you catch any

loved

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