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Come Away With Me

Come talk with me
we might have common oddities,

we could atleast see where it goes
no one knows, until they try things on for size;

come play this bantering game with me
you must know I kinda like you,

I've been exploring with my eyes
I hope you didn't reognize, I tried to be subtle;

come stay awhile
and we'll see what happens with our thoughts

'cause I've been wondering 'bout yours, of late
we could share a game of chemisry;

come be alone with me
we'll be surrounded by our pasts,

it shouldn't last if we share imaginations
you feel like exploring?

Come away wih me
even if it's only for a bit of time,

we deserve to know how high we'd fly
and I'd really like to fly away, with you.

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