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Clowncore

Submitted by DreamBug on Fri, 2020-11-06 23:02

Bright ruffled clothes,
White foundation and makeup in red, green, and blue.
Oversized shoes and floppy hats,
Little cars that our entire company can fit into
with ease.
Wacky hair and rainbow themes,
Balloons, stickers and patterns everywhere.

Review Request (Intensity): 
Please use care (this is a sensitive subject for me, do not critique harshly)
Review Request (Direction): 
How was my language use?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Last few words: 
I absolutely love clowns and clowncore vibes, so I made a poem about it.
Editing stage: 
Not actively editing
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Geezer

Sat, 2020-11-07 09:47

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