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Blue eyes blink open
across tattering gray sky
to watch storm depart

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Structured: Eastern
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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I've started enjoying writing them.


Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words ........Robert Frost☺

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I'm hoping that someone realizes what the "blue eyes" are. Thanks for coming by...........stan

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The picture was complete, in this grand write, I look forward to the storm departing lol,
Yours Ian

There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

A short poem for a short term view lol..........stan

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As the storm shatters?
Beautiful images of blue after the storm
Blue eyes peep?

I struggled between using winked or blinked and decided a wink carried too much of a closing connotation. Now PEEP is a different thing! I might need to "borrow" that for edit with your permission............stan

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It is so lovely

This ones beautiful touching on the profound

Nothing to add its lovely as is

Love Jc xxx

“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats

Imagine that . An old grizzled bald headed guy like me even getting close to the profound lmao. Thanks for such kind comment.............stan

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