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A clear white canvas

A clean clear canvas
cleansed with the calming
color of clarity the color of
white .

The falling of the paint
small and faint
Yet luminous and bright
Just take in the light
as it fills into
the Gorgeosity
of the
White .

As it’s morphing
into a marvelous
Moment of my memory
When there are
no cares.
Just you and me
never to part
as we lie
within our art.

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Oh, this is one of your romantic writes
Full of charm my friend. You kind of need sun glasses reading it! Great to read this from you.

Thank you...Teddy

And it is always a pleasure in hearing from you

Hlm life without literature is a life without logic.

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white an new beginning, fresh ,clear out the old bring in the new and hope leads the way

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My inspiration was the musical Sunday in the park with George

Hlm life without literature is a life without logic.

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Dear Edward, what a charming poem. I like its spiritual theme. Clever opening strophe with all the words beginning with "c". The rhyming and spacing are fine, as is the title.
Enjoyed, bring on more. Happy 2021, keep safe, not sorry. God bless, Gracy

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Hlm life without literature is a life without logic.

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Hlm life without literature is a life without logic.

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