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Clean? (A little rant)

Submitted by Rula on Wed, 2012-05-02 04:47

Why don't you wash your weary thoughts,
and brush out your heavy woes and pains.
Wipe out those tears in eyes,
and sweep everyday's miseries away.
Bleach all the stained ,
and the spotted hatreds in your heart
clean it all and say:
Hey..
"Everything is gonna be OKAY."

Last few words: 
An old write, thought I'd share it with you as a lightsome little piece...Hope you enjoy.
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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Ian.T

Fri, 2012-05-04 03:36

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I will have another go at cleaning up lol. Loved the simplicity of this write for such a big job, Yours Ian.T

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So find more reasons to believe in others..

Rula

Fri, 2012-05-04 08:10

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Thanks dear Ian ..I am happy you've dusted this piece and gave it
a tidy L00k...Appreciated:-)

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