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The Classic Whore

Hey, your love is simply a smack down
on your incessant costly short gown
you are invoking your potential customers
arousing them- sets a land mine for ruining
for those men who transacts with your body
with your elastic butts, and big-chested
what a sensuous body parts
heaven has consigned
a terrible love net
you're hot as hell
banging here and there
with full energy of lustfulness
now you are harbinger of darkness
abled men now strolling in your street
shopping with their eyes and lusting after thee

your lofty eyebrow invites
the lions to break out the forest glade
now the young cubs suffers your urge
'cause they're not yet the icon of strength
You've already set up your sign post
with heavy notes
enforcing targets on your adulterous lap

dollars and pounds
are now your primary laughter
your juicy part is now your drain hole
an encounter with you is a double loss

© Onyinyechi Cosmos Etu
Republic of Biafra
12:30 PM, 10/2/2022

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Hot, hot, hot. You have strong beliefs! Sentuous is spelled sensuous.

Thomas

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...so like my lost dreams...the flood

Thanks for the correction! I believe you from inception.

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Thanks boss! I appreciate every word here.

"Poetic license
gives
the poets
the free will to
embroider a good tale
and deviate from the established rules of language"~Jackweb

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