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CIRCLES

Submitted by Geremia on Fri, 2012-12-21 15:35

CIRCLES

I rode on steeds two
black in a sky indigo blue.
hooves sparkling fire
across the universe
higher and higher they flew
me
to the ends of places new.

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Editing - rough draft

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Ian.T

Sat, 2012-12-22 03:52

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A neat little dream, though a projection of feelings "great"...
Just an edit to the Road to make it Rode.
You take care and I hope that a feeling of peace fills you as you enjoy this season, and light another candle for me I will see its warmth, Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

Geremia

Sat, 2012-12-22 06:28

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Thanks, Ian :)

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loved

Sat, 2012-12-22 06:37

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all of yours
I really enjoy and learn anew
from you

loved

Geremia

Sat, 2012-12-22 06:44

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and i appreciate your comments.i do read bur been unable to respond as would like.i enjoy ur work, my friend, and admire how much you have grown, ur poetry has an underlyimg music of hope and joy of living..
be well.,

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loved

Sat, 2012-12-22 06:59

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its indeed an honour
to read such a eulogy

loved

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