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Chocolate Men

Men are like chocolates
some to soft, some to hard
some sweet and tasty
some dark and nasty
I’ve tried a few in my time
on some I wouldn’t spend a dime
I like the ones that melt in my mouth not in my hand
add a few nuts, yummm, that’s grand
men are like chocolates
some flavoursome, some not

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too soft , too hard?

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thanks x

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Are you saying a hard man is good to find?...................stan

yes definitely lol x

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Do you need those too's in line 2
Some soft some hard

your right must get rid of the too's or the somes thanks a mil x

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chocolates just melt in the mouth
the tongue has to be sweet ...
it must have the force to slice
men's chocolates are hard too
if solid men have been seen by you..

loved

Hi loved another poem in response they melt in the mouth not in the hand lol x thanks have a great day

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dooooooooooooo

loved

xx

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Yummy nothing like chocolate and a hard man hmmmmm

I've nothing to add to this flavoursome mix

Hugs Jc x

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

thanks Jc x

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