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cherise chime

touch me where I burn
your pang
a key in the black latch
the long hair
soft
like snow descending
in its fall

this burial love
that churns
beneath the winters
hush

let me heal these
visions with hands
reading you where
they touch

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Comments

Bravo and Happy new Year to you esker. Hope you are staying warm where you are. Nice to read you once again

Mona Mia

yes, elegant and meaningful

cheers,
Jess
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