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Chariot To Hell

Black body
Laced in golden flames
Nevermind the horses
A hemi will do just fine

She revved the engine
And started her descent
A steel powerhouse bouncing
Against nitrous embers

Satan heard her coming
And shook his head
He was in for it now
His wife was amongst the dead

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Free verse
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Not Explicit Content

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For catching the spelling error...much appreciated...glad you enjoyed

~RoseBlack~

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So yeah the Hemi. Hemispheric pistons are the hallmark of Dodge, Plymouth and Chrysler. Who’s logo is what?? A ram!! The Horned god, Baphomet to me. Satan to non pagan infidels. That’s deep symbolism.!.!

Tim

But must be why it resonated with me...plus I prefer hemi to horses...

~RoseBlack~

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