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Censor Sensor:

Freedom to express
Poetry has become less
Arbitrariness

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Structured: Eastern
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
Utilizing the spectre of extremism, extreme efforts are being employed to eradicate the public right to free expression. Whistle blowers are being targeted and their right to inform, expose and educate the public on official corruption, chicanery and criminal conspiracy is curtailed. Those states that constantly broadcast their democratic foundations have been among the first to adopt the politically correct propaganda of New-speak.
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Comments

Without a request for critique, this is the limit of my commentary.

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Jonathan Moore

Please Sir, may I have some more?

author comment

I only critique poetry were the owner is serious about thirty work.

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Jonathan Moore

I am the originator of a new style of Poetry (Rhyku - Haiku of three rhyming lines with a contextual Title line). You do not know me so I would appreciate it if you do not arbitrarily ascribe your limited understanding to other people's intentions and motivations.

If you do not like or appreciate the Rhykus, you have your right to your views but please refrain from casting aspersions on the poet.

author comment

If all you want is to be told you are pretty, just say so. This passive aggressive whining is rather sad.

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Jonathan Moore

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