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Carnally Evil (only for adult minded)

Carnally evil (only for adult minded)
The life within my arms
was tried
from day one to the end
but I had no need to say
Amen,
Till today I have
yet not been totally spent…

The souls belonging to a species of a kind
leave indelible memories far behind,
betwixt curvaceous arms and limbs
we slaughtered
day without and day within
yet not satiated to the fullest extent,
we still have many more years unspent…,

The life of exoticity well exhausted
in the arms we love to remain
ever entwined
but
don’t say friends,
no it’s not yet time
the passion has yet to peek
still in each other’s arms
we still orgasm seek
and perish
as the night slowly passes by
yet another day comes
to stand by.

Such ecstasy of forbidden love,
who damned said twas forbidden?
no life would seed for a moment,
if twas not fully used
well tried each moment
life continues still
till in the tunnels
it continues to spill…

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments

I read Henry Miller in my day
and others writers of adult nature
female also

I greatly like your style of writing Loved
it does not stumble and swerves its
way about in a rythmic way that I do
find appealing to read

many are not used to writing this kind
of form and it does show as jeuvenile
or petulant despite using many words

this is just right for my taste
(did I say I was hungry??)

Thank You

Who can satiate a poet’s poetic hunger?

(did I say I was hungry??)

I compose number of poems
knowing none will read them
but that doesn't deter me
as I have composed since eons

loved

author comment

The human mind finds its own way
to scan the minds of others
And no two minds are identical.

I'm so glad that you have seen through the glass doors
And
beyond juvenility and petulance, not withstanding
Eroticism is a natural remedy for straying humanity.

loved

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