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CAN YOU HEAR ME NOW ?

Ham steak and mushroom onion,
not to mention cause for the oven
Snoop got in a fight but he still delivers
another wanna be Nigga
stick out his middle finger
plans we make in Hughs estate
Playboy ain't nude anymore
Nah, I'm not giving you a sermon with veins to explore
some spotted wolf out on the plains,

Can you hear me now ?
built this city on rock & roll
awe to decay its deathly toll
wash in lots of cold water
why do we even beg to discover
the pipe was broken can replace the water
stick your head between your legs and kiss your ass goodbye

henceforth to sing a lulabye

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A good write Chevyvent A poem of the urban blight zeitgeist and relevant reminder of how horrible and low minded to many folks in high places are

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