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Camminiamo Insieme

If all tragedies of life
led to a path of warmth,
there would be nothing
left to write about...

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one of those who reads Latin; I have no idea what your title ,means. I will wait for one of our enlightened readers to spell it our for me. I do like your thoughts and agree wholeheartedly. "If not for the darkness, there would be no yearning for the light". ~Geez.
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Honest critique and comments shouldn't hurt.
It's why we are here, to get better at our craft.

we walk together, is the title. Its italian... Hey geezer nice to see you here.

my poem means if we do not suffer tragedy , we do not always have the means to express it in our poetry. Thank you for your thoughts.

Thank you...Teddy

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Really like this one, Teddy!! It does what it says on the tin.

Brevity in everything
save, love, life, and wit.

Obi.

Thank you for your very kind words,
It's my pleasure when others enjoy my work.

Thank you...Teddy

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Double post

Thank you...Teddy

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