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BUZZ

BUZZ

Buzzards flying all around
heavy motion in the sky
wings hung low and sharp eye.
I keep two feet on the ground
sit but won't lie down..

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I can't see how this goes with the above lines, Joe.

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Buzzards go after dead meat-- lying down is metaphor of death.

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Nice use of the metaphor. Liked the title too.

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