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Butterfly

Blossom with light wings
Where will your travels take you?
Find me on the blooms

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Haiku inspired by my encounter with a beautiful butterfly this morning - wish I could include the photo I took of it - amazing!
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the comparison of the butterfly to a flower's bloom; which is something that they mimic, as a camouflage. I can see, in mind's eye, the butterfly winging it's way amongst the flowers and delighting you. Nice job in bringing the thought to view. ~ Geez.
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Thank you Geez! I was fortunate to get a great pic of this creature, but it took about a dozen shots to get one I liked. Hope you are well!

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Michael Anthony

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for the well wishes of good health. I'm good as can be expected. I have used and abused my body terribly in my 73 yrs. of life, so all things considered, I feel lucky to be in as good shape as I am. ~ Geez.
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are mystical creatures. It's a wonder how they get from one place to another with such erratic flight characteristics, but they certainly have managed for eons.

Thomas

....so like my lost dreams...the flood

Thank you Tri! The encounter definitely had a mystical quality about it.

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Michael Anthony

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