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Buddha Says
Life is but a choice
Laundering dirty money
Or doing laundry
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Structured: Eastern
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How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
Is the internal logic consistent?
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Lavender
Fri, 2022-08-12 09:37
Buddha Says
Hello, Sen,
Very clever, great structure, and a wonderful philosophy! Very wise!
Thank you,
L
Sen99
Wed, 2022-08-17 04:28
Lavender Laundry awaits you
Hi thanks kind comment, have a great day
author commentlovedly
Fri, 2022-08-12 16:19
did you mean BUDDHA SAID
Now hear me
LOVEDLY SAYS
Have a wife
enjoy life
as and when
else marry strife
in lieu of women
Rosewood Apothecary
Fri, 2022-08-12 17:49
Impressive
This is a very original idea. It’s inspiring and I’d like to use this concept as a part of my individual growth. I’ve been doing laundry forever and I’ll continue to do so.
Well done,
Tim
Sen99
Wed, 2022-08-17 04:26
Keep Doing Laundry
Hi thanks glad it resonated with you, its nice to inspire someone else
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