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Brush with Death
The wind slapped my face
are you awake
I am Death today
don’t wait
I shall speed up
I may
as death warned me by
my hairs stood on end
my body was now shaky
will death also touch me
I thought I am invulnerable
no wind
no cyclone
no tsunami
can ever push me
into the
Burning Inferno Garbage Bin
of Time
who dared the wind to
but notwithstanding the fear of death lurking
I am now nailed to the ground firmly
but little will I be able to do
if it the wind comes at a missile’s speed
I shall also cave in
My hair stands on the edge of existence
on its cliff like verge
as the ultimatum of that
Unknown mind
can only one remind
it for you now does
finally chime
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Geezer
Sat, 2020-06-13 10:51
Yeah...
we all die. It's just a matter of when. "No man shall know the moment of his passing before hand." We may have the day right, but the moment is Death's. ~ Geezer.
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Gracy
Sat, 2020-06-13 11:20
Hi lovedly, you speak the
Hi lovedly, you speak the truth (rather lengthily, IMO), but interesting all the way thru'.
"Behold, He Cometh!: Are You Prepared?"
It seems none of us is prepared. We are afraid.
Enjoyed, if that's the correct word for doom and fear. All the best, Gracy
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lovedly
Sat, 2020-06-13 21:54
Wonderful to have a comment
from you ma'am thanks
Wonderful
lovedly
Sat, 2020-06-13 11:51
you are abs right
with if it were centered
towards me
but this was a painting of life
of daily PASSERBY
BUT
I Appreciate it as
with
Thanks